Let’s share your ideaS about the topic: “Car and the problems about it”. ( H9'S FIXED....SỬA VÀI LỖI CHÍNH TẢ CHO SIS ^^)

Nowadays, having a car has become popular for some family. The raising accident in traffic public made everyone feel safer than moving from traffic public or by motorbike. Some (ONE ) of the advantages of the car IS THAT: the car will helpING you to avoid the disadvantageS ( INCONVINIENCE) of changing weather especially the weather like Vietnam, (.) We have the rain season and sometimes it is rain suddenly although it is the summer and you never have to think about the weather when you drive by car and we can go out with the family together etc. (SOMETIMES, IT RAINS SUDDENLY IN NOT ONLY THE RAINY SEASON BUT ALSO THE SUMMER.

BESIDES, THE CAR IS VERY USEFUL IF YOU LIVE FAR FROM YOUR WORK PLACELE OR A WIDE-RANGING COUNTRY.

LET’S FILL FULLY YOUR PETRO TANK’S CAR AND GO ANYWHERE YOU WANT) . Although the car has many advantages but it brings some disadvantage to

 ( ON THE OTHER HAND, THE CAR ALSO HAS SO MANY DISADVANDTAGES TOO).

The car is bigger than a motorbike or bicycle and we are very hard to drive it on narrow streets or in a traffic jam. Unfortunately, the car is the main reason of the congestion of the traffic in these days. (ALMOST ALL +) Our streets (+WHICH) are small and isn’t ( not)  enough space for every kind of vehicles especially in rush hour. Casually, the accident in traffic increase with the number of cars ( CASUALLY, THE MORE CARS HAD BEEN PRODUCED, THE MORE ACCIDENT HAD HAD) . Although the Ministry of Transport has some of the plans (+SUCH AS: STRONG PUNISHMENT, LIMITED DRIVING IN PEAK HOUR) to solve this problem but (+NONE OF THEM ) seems effective. Almost of the reason of accidents are the drivers doesn't mention about driving and doesn't learn law clearly ( , BECASE OF THE MOST REGULAR REASON IS BELONG TO THE SENSE OF DRIVERS).

The car emits ALOT OF nitrogen oxides, carbon monoxide which is a problem of increasing in pollution THAN OTHER TRANSPORTS. The car makes the atmosphere become more polluted. As we know, these Toxics damages our environment (THROUGH GREENHOUSE EFFECT ) and human health and . They are one of the causes of human diseases. Nitrogen causes symptom of asthma. Carbon monoxide (WHAT ) the MAJORITY reason of increasing the ability of heart disease (IS CARBON MONOXIDE). Benzene makes cancer. The emission of factories and cars with the air  pollution is the cause why the health of human is declining.
Basically, I think that the advantages of car are undeniable but I suggest that the Government should encourage citizens use cars environmentally - friendly.