pasta fixed no#1

Topic 1: should teenagers have a part time job while studying?

 Are you a student in high school, secondary shool?  You have a part time job, here are somethings will come to you:

Nowadays, many people have been working while studying in the school. They said that it’s the best memorable experience in their life, but it’s actually a hard time for them to do best at both studying and working. In my opinion, I agree that teenagers should have a part time job besides school for several reasons

Nowadays, many people had been working while studying in the school. They said that it’s the best memorable experience in their life. But, should the teenages have a part time job along their studying?

First of all, having a part time job will help you earn money. You can buy anything you want, pay the cost of living by your own. You do not have to depend on parents’ money. You earn money, you spend money, and I’m sure that you will do it wisely because it is not easy to earn money. You understand that deeply. So, part time job not only helps you to spend money by your own, but also teaches you how to save it and use it efficiently.  

First of all, that’s money. You can buy anything you want , pay the cost of living by your own. It’s a good feeling, all right?. Morever, it’s also a good chance to create your own business with the free finance. A young milionare, why not?

Secondly, part time job is a good channel to make friends. More relationships will come to you. It’s really important for you in the future because they are a good connection for you to other relationships. Especially if you want to be a businessman, a lawyer, It is really important for you in the future because they are a good connection for you to other relationships. It’s up to you to choose a best friend who may be always behind you along the years. You know that: “the more friends you have, the more success you do”.

If you don’t need money, no matter. More relationships will come to you. It’s up to you to choose a best friend who  maybe always behind you along the years. You know that: “ the more friends you have, the more success you do”.

Beside the points, if you spend time on working, it’s better than wasting time on Internet. A lot of teenagers spend so much time on playing video games, or access to social networks such such as: facebook, tweeter… The problem is you spend all day flirting to your friends instead of hitting the book or playing sport. It is bad for your health and your mind. Doing a part time job makes you busy with working, you don’t have free time for Internet and more real time for new experiences.

Biside the points, you have so much money and you don’t know how to spend it, the part time job will teach you about the time value of money, how difficult to earn money so you can build it bigger forever. You have  a lot of friends in so many networks such as: facebook, tweetter, etc but  the problem is you spend all day flirting to your friends instead of hitting the book or somethings in a real life. I remind you that the part time job is a key. You even have no time for yourself and then Facebook will disappear automaticaly from your mind without any drags.

On the other hands, straining at working would make you have nothing.  A real story about an honor 17 year-old Vietnamese girl who is living in Texas, had been punished about $100 and putted in the prison in 24 hours by the Houston court because of truancies. She took both full time job and part time job that make her so tired to go to school. Although, her parents were broken, she had to earn money for younger sister, older brother, and herself but in my opinions, overload in working is not good for any reasons. So working besides studying is the best way to success but remember that: “Don’t spread yourself too thin” .

On the other hands, strainning at working would make you have nothing.  A real story about an honor 17 year-old vietnamese girl who is living in texas, had been punished about  $ 100 and putted in the prison in 24 hours by the houston court because of  many truancies. She took both full time job and part time job that make her so tired to go to school. Although , her parrents were broken, she had to earn money for younger sister, older brother, and herself but in my oppinions, overload in working is not good for any reasons.

In conclusion, having a part time jobs bring you a lot of benefits. Besides you can earn more money for  life expenses, use time wisely, you can also create more relationships for your future. Always remind yourself to study and it is number one purpose. Be a smart person to help you balance your life. 

So working besides studying is the best way to success but remmember that :

“ don’t spread your self too thin” .