Let’s share your ideaS about the topic: “Car and the problems about it”. ( H9'S FIXED....SỬA VÀI LỖI CHÍNH TẢ CHO SIS ^^)

Nowadays, having a car has become popular for some family. The raising accident in traffic public made everyone feel safer than moving from traffic public or by motorbike. Some (ONE ) of the advantages of the car IS THAT: the car will helpING you to avoid the disadvantageS ( INCONVINIENCE) of changing weather especially the weather like Vietnam, (.) We have the rain season and sometimes it is rain suddenly although it is the summer and you never have to think about the weather when you drive by car and we can go out with the family together etc. (SOMETIMES, IT RAINS SUDDENLY IN NOT ONLY THE RAINY SEASON BUT ALSO THE SUMMER.

BESIDES, THE CAR IS VERY USEFUL IF YOU LIVE FAR FROM YOUR WORK PLACELE OR A WIDE-RANGING COUNTRY.

LET’S FILL FULLY YOUR PETRO TANK’S CAR AND GO ANYWHERE YOU WANT) . Although the car has many advantages but it brings some disadvantage to

 ( ON THE OTHER HAND, THE CAR ALSO HAS SO MANY DISADVANDTAGES TOO).

The car is bigger than a motorbike or bicycle and we are very hard to drive it on narrow streets or in a traffic jam. Unfortunately, the car is the main reason of the congestion of the traffic in these days. (ALMOST ALL +) Our streets (+WHICH) are small and isn’t ( not)  enough space for every kind of vehicles especially in rush hour. Casually, the accident in traffic increase with the number of cars ( CASUALLY, THE MORE CARS HAD BEEN PRODUCED, THE MORE ACCIDENT HAD HAD) . Although the Ministry of Transport has some of the plans (+SUCH AS: STRONG PUNISHMENT, LIMITED DRIVING IN PEAK HOUR) to solve this problem but (+NONE OF THEM ) seems effective. Almost of the reason of accidents are the drivers doesn't mention about driving and doesn't learn law clearly ( , BECASE OF THE MOST REGULAR REASON IS BELONG TO THE SENSE OF DRIVERS).

The car emits ALOT OF nitrogen oxides, carbon monoxide which is a problem of increasing in pollution THAN OTHER TRANSPORTS. The car makes the atmosphere become more polluted. As we know, these Toxics damages our environment (THROUGH GREENHOUSE EFFECT ) and human health and . They are one of the causes of human diseases. Nitrogen causes symptom of asthma. Carbon monoxide (WHAT ) the MAJORITY reason of increasing the ability of heart disease (IS CARBON MONOXIDE). Benzene makes cancer. The emission of factories and cars with the air  pollution is the cause why the health of human is declining.
Basically, I think that the advantages of car are undeniable but I suggest that the Government should encourage citizens use cars environmentally - friendly.

                               

               

sex education ( pasta- my thinking , your aswering)

In recent years, the abortion rate in Vietnam has been rising and be always in on top of the highest rate one in the world. About 1.4 million abortions  miscarriages are performed annually in Vietnam, which has a population of 88 million included 99.99 % teenagers. The high rate of induced abortion is an alarming issue, indicates that the managers of health and family planning programs have not good quality, especially in education for teenagers>>good.

 (most of my friends )Vietnamese teenagers lack of knowledge about sexual behavior and reproductive health…>> are you sure<There are many reasons for that, but I think three main ones are people peoples' awareness, school education and teenager’s behaviors.

Vietnam is a traditional (where is japan?)country so that people are afraid of talking about sex.

>>As well as so many long feudal history countries, talking about sex in public  is not polite in vietnam.<<<

When we live in a society that all the people want to hide that problem, you are not an exception. It’s the reason why media the media or schools do not have any sex education programs. Instead of thinking that sex is a bad thing, people should be open-minded >>about sex education<<, especially parents >>the parents<<. A lot of teenagers said their moms and dads are reluctant to discuss >>sex << such a delicate problem so they feel discouraged to ask questions. They are not willing to talk about sex because they think that their children are not mature enough to understand >> which can easily hurt their innocent thinking. Nowadays >>Worser<<,  more and more parents hardly spend their time on in sharing with their kids nowadays.

However, they need to know that family is an ideal environment to educate children in their developing period>> however, they do not know that when their children ask something, it’s a good opportunity for them to learn something, expecially at home in developing period when has so many enigmas << . Children can share difficulties as well as questions in their lives with their parents because they are the closest friends to their children. Besides parents’ responsibilities the parents’ responsibilities, the school education plays an important role to educate teenagers. It is not only because they spend a lot of time in schools >> school<<  but also their peers and teachers influence them a lot on awareness. Many teenagers cannot share their feelings with parents but they can tell it to their friends, but sometimes it is not a wise advice  >>have some advice recieved from their friends. Some times, it is not a wise prediction because<< they don’t have real experience in life and think in a simple way >>simple<< so that adult’s care is really important. Teachers must be the people who teach them knowledge the knowledge and care about their thoughts to help them immediately. In addition, Sex education is still limited in schools and the lessons about sex are unusual in some classes. Schools lack of sex education programs, psychologist and sex educator seriously. I think Viet Nam should insert sex education >>not only sex education but also psychologists <<into schools so that students can easily broaden their knowledge as well as understand clearly about sex.

Then, they can avoid some complicated problems that occur in their lives. Conversely, a survey done about some countries in Asia shows that they are eager for sex education, so they have different methods to educate about sex. For instance, Indonesia and Korea apply sex education in schools through books or workshops. Besides, in Japan, sex education is compulsory for children from 10 to 11 years old. Those are some differences between sex education in Viet Nam and other countries. Vietnam is integrating with other countries, aside from some positive aspects there are many negative aspects such as free lifestyles and liberal thoughts from other countries that affect to young people seriously. That’s one of reason the reason why they are usually curious about new things, especially sex. It’s a sensitive issue in their society and people feel uncomfortable and seem hiding it from them, so they want to know it clearly. The only way they can find out the answers is through internet the Internet, books, magazines and even peers. They are from many different sources so it can make the young confused, frightening and mislead them in selecting this information and choosing which one is suitable for them. Moreover >>unfortunately<<, at this age, they want to discover, prove themselves and imitate adults’ action.

Some teenagers make love with their partner without condom>>and other the same way to prevent and sothat<< lead bad consequences such as: diseases or unexpected pregnancies… They do not have enough knowledge to protect themselves. In foreign countries, the young can actively prevent them because condoms are freely available. Obviously, young Vietnamese people need a better understanding of sexual health and theirs their rights in order to ensure safer sex and a higher quality of life.

        In conclusion, sex education is important, urgent and essential for children nowadays. Instead of avoiding this sensitive and complicated problem, open and respectful discussions of sexual matters could encourage healthy attitudes surrounding sexuality and positive relationships. The government must care more about adding sex education in media the media, school system the school system as well as families to raise people awareness about healthy sex. Sex education must be supported enthusiastically to help children form attitudes, beliefs and values about identity, relationships and intimacy. Healthy people, healthy society, definitely Vietnam can reduce abortion rates, HIV AIDS, as well as many social evils. I believe in a better future for young generations if we put sex education into action right way away(?).

should TA have a part-time job while studying?

Many people 'had worked' while studied in the school. They said that it’s the best memorable experience in their life. But, should the 'teenagers' have a part-time job along their studying?

Are you a student in high school, secondary 'school'?  You have a 'part-time' job, here are somethings will come to you:

First of all, that’s money. You can buy anything you want , pay the cost of living by your own. It’s a good feeling, all right?. 'moreover', it’s also a good chance to create your own business with the free finance. A young 'millionaire', why not?

If you don’t need money, no matter. More relationships will come to you. It’s up to you to choose a best friend who  maybe always behind you along the years. You know that: “ the more friends you have, the more success you do”.

'beside' the points, you have so much money and you don’t know how to spend it, the part-time job will teach you about the time value of money, how difficult to earn money so you can build it bigger forever. You have  a lot of friends in so many networks such as: Facebook, tweeter, etc but  the problem is you spend all day flirting to your friends instead of hitting the book or somethings in 'life'. I remind you that the part-time job is a key. You even have no time for yourself and then Facebook will disappear 'automatically' from your mind without any drags.

On the other hands, 'straining' at working would make you have nothing.  A real story about an honor 17 year-old Vietnamese girl who is living in texas, had been punished about  $ 100 and putted in the prison in 24 hours by the Houston court because of  many truancies. She took both full time job and part-time job that make her so tired to go to school. Although , her 'parents' were broken, she had to earn money for younger sister, older brother, and herself but in my 'opinions', overload in working is not good for any reasons.

So working besides studying is the best way to success but 'remember' that :

“ don’t spread your self too thin” .

pasta fixed no#1

Topic 1: should teenagers have a part time job while studying?

 Are you a student in high school, secondary shool?  You have a part time job, here are somethings will come to you:

Nowadays, many people have been working while studying in the school. They said that it’s the best memorable experience in their life, but it’s actually a hard time for them to do best at both studying and working. In my opinion, I agree that teenagers should have a part time job besides school for several reasons

Nowadays, many people had been working while studying in the school. They said that it’s the best memorable experience in their life. But, should the teenages have a part time job along their studying?

First of all, having a part time job will help you earn money. You can buy anything you want, pay the cost of living by your own. You do not have to depend on parents’ money. You earn money, you spend money, and I’m sure that you will do it wisely because it is not easy to earn money. You understand that deeply. So, part time job not only helps you to spend money by your own, but also teaches you how to save it and use it efficiently.  

First of all, that’s money. You can buy anything you want , pay the cost of living by your own. It’s a good feeling, all right?. Morever, it’s also a good chance to create your own business with the free finance. A young milionare, why not?

Secondly, part time job is a good channel to make friends. More relationships will come to you. It’s really important for you in the future because they are a good connection for you to other relationships. Especially if you want to be a businessman, a lawyer, It is really important for you in the future because they are a good connection for you to other relationships. It’s up to you to choose a best friend who may be always behind you along the years. You know that: “the more friends you have, the more success you do”.

If you don’t need money, no matter. More relationships will come to you. It’s up to you to choose a best friend who  maybe always behind you along the years. You know that: “ the more friends you have, the more success you do”.

Beside the points, if you spend time on working, it’s better than wasting time on Internet. A lot of teenagers spend so much time on playing video games, or access to social networks such such as: facebook, tweeter… The problem is you spend all day flirting to your friends instead of hitting the book or playing sport. It is bad for your health and your mind. Doing a part time job makes you busy with working, you don’t have free time for Internet and more real time for new experiences.

Biside the points, you have so much money and you don’t know how to spend it, the part time job will teach you about the time value of money, how difficult to earn money so you can build it bigger forever. You have  a lot of friends in so many networks such as: facebook, tweetter, etc but  the problem is you spend all day flirting to your friends instead of hitting the book or somethings in a real life. I remind you that the part time job is a key. You even have no time for yourself and then Facebook will disappear automaticaly from your mind without any drags.

On the other hands, straining at working would make you have nothing.  A real story about an honor 17 year-old Vietnamese girl who is living in Texas, had been punished about $100 and putted in the prison in 24 hours by the Houston court because of truancies. She took both full time job and part time job that make her so tired to go to school. Although, her parents were broken, she had to earn money for younger sister, older brother, and herself but in my opinions, overload in working is not good for any reasons. So working besides studying is the best way to success but remember that: “Don’t spread yourself too thin” .

On the other hands, strainning at working would make you have nothing.  A real story about an honor 17 year-old vietnamese girl who is living in texas, had been punished about  $ 100 and putted in the prison in 24 hours by the houston court because of  many truancies. She took both full time job and part time job that make her so tired to go to school. Although , her parrents were broken, she had to earn money for younger sister, older brother, and herself but in my oppinions, overload in working is not good for any reasons.

In conclusion, having a part time jobs bring you a lot of benefits. Besides you can earn more money for  life expenses, use time wisely, you can also create more relationships for your future. Always remind yourself to study and it is number one purpose. Be a smart person to help you balance your life. 

So working besides studying is the best way to success but remmember that :

“ don’t spread your self too thin” .